Planning

Initial idea

• Lesbian romcom
• College students
• Date
• 1 of a couple is leaving via train
• Lesbian horror
• Lesbian couple in date in park
• Dubbed narration
• Poem voice over

Summary

Shots of a lesbian couple walking through the park, with implications of them being on a date, and them spending time together at home. Really cinematic shots experimenting with different types of framing. A poem voice over from the point of view of one of the girls which tells their story and the state of their relationship.

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Final treatment

After research there isn’t really anything we would need to change from our initial plot to full fill the wants of the prospective audience. Our initial plan didn’t include any stereotypes which was the biggest issue that flagged up during research.

Final plot

Shots of a lesbian couple walking through the park, with implications of them being on a date, and them spending time together at home. Really cinematic shots experimenting with different types of framing. A poem voice over from the point of view of one of the girls which tells their story and the state of their relationship.